"It is a pity that we know so much about Christ, and yet enjoy Him so little."

- Charles Spurgeon
Supply and Demand

Ok, I read the comments on the "What Are Your Thinklings Reading Habits?" post and noticed a familiar cry for other thinklings to post and a request for poetry. The poetry request may have been a joke, but alas... here's a poem I wrote for kicks. It's nothing serious or deep... it probably belongs in a comment thread rather than a post, but alas, here 'tis:

it's day, then night comes,
and all day long one song i hums.
i heard it on FM something or other,
and was interupted by my loving mother.
"it's time to go" so off i went,
with a buck ninety-two just waiting to be spent.
the story fades from that point on,
so i'll jump in time, even way past prom.
a college man, i'm labeled by most,
where a gourmet meal consists of toast.
i watch tv to pass the time,
why couldn't i major in sitting, eating, or mime?
now i have a job and get paid a check,
new car? new home? aw what the heck.
the world's my oyster, or so i'm told,
what happens when this oyster gets old?
or perhaps this guy's allergic to shellfish.


I probably should've included a picture of a monkey, eh?

Update:

Monkey Marceau

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Comments on "Supply and Demand":
1. Paula - 06/13/2005 10:21 am CDT

Yeah, monkeys do tend to add depth.

2. Jared - 06/13/2005 10:35 am CDT

A monkey doing mime.

3. Brian in Fresno - 06/13/2005 1:01 pm CDT

A black monkey in a cool mine doing mime?

4. Kevin - 06/13/2005 5:08 pm CDT

Now THIS needs to be a regular feature! Go STROKE!

In deference to another thread, I should give my interpretation of the angst you are portraying here via your art. It's obvious that your allergy to all things the world has to offer you, and how the silent expressions of the miming monkey are the only thing that can portray your agony, and it says about your relationship to Christ ...

Whoops, gotta go.

Fun stuff, Stroke

5. Debbie - 06/13/2005 5:16 pm CDT

Am I the only one disturbed by this monkey???
I mean, I like monkeys just as much as the next gal, but this one is kinda freakin' me out!

6. Bill - 06/13/2005 7:13 pm CDT

Yeah, i agree. This monkey gives me the willies.

7. Shrode - 06/14/2005 1:20 am CDT

Great poem! You have talent, no question.
Is this stream of consciousness? I'm not certain.

8. Jared - 06/14/2005 2:38 am CDT

I thought maybe it was another one of those mysterious Blo pics.

I say we name this monkey and it can be Stroke's sidekick.
Since he's in a mineshaft, I suggest: Shaft, the Miming Monkey

9. Bill - 06/14/2005 4:40 am CDT

Heh - "shaft the miming monkey" !

Kevin - you are incorrect. The white glove represents purity. Notice Shaft shielding his eyes. His eyes look our way - because we are impure. Yet shaft is also impure - in a dirty mine. Clean glove, shielding his eyes from our impurity within a shaft of impurity.

Yet his eyes still see.

Is his hand dirty within the glove?

Is this not truly Stroke's masterful artistic rendering of the Pharisaical opposition to Jesus? The reference to shellfish in the poem is a dead giveaway, harkening back to the Levitical admonishion against partaking of that demonic mollusk.

And the ape looks like a man, and yet isn't. As we all are, wearing the pure white glove of self-righteousness but not yet truly purified, hiding our eyes and yet looking, eating our shellfish and yet sneezing. Miming in a mineshaft when we should be running free and unshod o'er the daisied plains.

Man, stroke, this speaks to me, man.

[snap snap snap snap snap]

10. Brian in Fresno - 06/14/2005 4:51 am CDT

You guys are cracking me up, never, ever did I think my post would be fuel for such glorious art. Not to mention soulful introspection and expression.

11. stroke - 06/14/2005 5:14 am CDT

"glorious art"

that's right... on demand.

12. Quaid - 06/14/2005 5:45 am CDT

STOP STOP STOP

Who are we to interpret??? Should not the author be the one to help us understand the truth, or lack thereof, behind what has here been rendered?

It is not for us to say what has been portrayed. STOP THE INSANITY!

13. Kevin - 06/14/2005 6:07 am CDT

But if any man speak in poetry, let it be by two or at the most by three, and that by course; and let one interpret.

14. Bill - 06/14/2005 6:24 am CDT

Quaid, I do believe that I am uniquely gifted to interpret Stroke's teachings. And my interpretation stands, a golden obelisk of unvarnished truth. The true interpretation of Stroke's mystic ruminations.

And where does Stroke's wisdom come from?

The fro, my son.

The fro . . .

15. stroke - 06/14/2005 6:31 am CDT

is it too early to make a monkey mime banner?

'cuz i could get right on that.

rob, can i have a monkey mime smiley?

16. Raindream - 06/14/2005 6:37 am CDT

that's a scary monkey

17. Bill - 06/14/2005 6:46 am CDT

Stroke - do it!

18. Brian in Fresno - 06/14/2005 7:31 am CDT

Here we go yet again. The reason it looks scary is because it is a great ape otherwise known as a gorilla. Largely harmless. They are vegeterain, much like the pop star I believe. They do wheigh in at about 400-500 lbs. and are as strong as the combined strength of about 7 or 8 people. Gorillas are only cute and cuddley when they are younger than about a year.

19. Jared - 06/14/2005 7:50 am CDT

The question I'm asking myself: Is that monkey's white glove on its hand or foot? Because monkeys' hands and feet look the same.
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Maybe the black figure covering his face (like he is ashamed?) with a white glove is a Michael Jackson reference.
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Stroke emailed me to say I should rename his sidekick. Apparently he didn't think Stroke and Shaft sounded too good together.
It makes me chuckle, so I'm keepin' it up.

Long live Shaft the Monkey-Mime!

20. Bill - 06/14/2005 8:08 am CDT

Or is it Shaft the Mine-Dwelling Monkey Mime?

Say that five times fast.

Who's the cat that won't cop out
When there's danger all about?
Shaft!
Right On!

They say this cat Shaft is a bad mother-Shut Your Mouth!
I'm talkin' 'bout Shaft.
Then we can dig it!

21. stroke - 06/14/2005 8:58 am CDT

umm, brian in fresno... look closer... it's a monkey, not an ape. i made sure there were nor innaccuracies in my research.

22. Jared - 06/14/2005 9:00 am CDT

Then we can dig it!

Yes, like one digs a mine shaft.

Wow, this pic Stroke has posted has really unleashed a treasure trove of interpretative possibilities. Like a many-faceted diamond, the complexities and angles are seemingly endless.
Shaft the Monkey-Mime may be the world's most perfect -- and therefore the world's most true -- image.

23. Brian in Fresno - 06/14/2005 9:05 am CDT

Stroke,

It is beauty that is in the eye of the beholder, not biology, this is an ape.

When I envisioned the coal mine I was thinking of one that didn't have any lights in it. Oh well.

24. stroke - 06/14/2005 9:14 am CDT

BIF,

how can you lambast others for calling apes monkeys and then accept a monkey as an ape?

how dare you, sir!?

Shaft is offended, as well. i can see him now removing his mime glove to smack you and challenge you to pistols at dusk.

"No one understands him but his woman."

25. Jared - 06/14/2005 9:21 am CDT

Will he shoot the pistol with his foot? 'Cause that would be hilarious.

26. Brian in Fresno - 06/14/2005 9:34 am CDT

If he shoots with his foot does that mean I have to shoot with my foot?

27. Bill - 06/14/2005 9:59 am CDT

We've had some weird posts on Thinklings before . . .

But this one is starting to enter Bizarro land

28. Jared - 06/14/2005 10:51 am CDT

Bizarro Land. Where everybody and everything in this dimension has a bizarro doppelganger.

Brian asked if he had to shoot with his foot, too. Is it possible -- dare we dream? -- that Brian in Fresno is actually the Bizarro Shaft the Monkey-Mime?

29. Quaid - 06/14/2005 11:23 am CDT

I will begin selling tickets for the duel next week. They will go for $50/seat.

Depending on who wins, the glove will be up for auction on EBAY.

Coming Soon:
Shaft the Mine-Monkey
vs.
Shaft in Fresno

in the first ever Thinklings Foot-Pistol Duel

30. Brian in Fresno - 06/14/2005 11:27 am CDT

That photo is still of an ape and not a monkey.

I guess some of you don't spend enough time in the right kind of zoo.

31. Bill - 06/14/2005 11:27 am CDT

Shaft!

Right oooooonnnnn . . . . .

32. Bill - 06/14/2005 11:29 am CDT

You know, I don't believe that gloved-hand is the ape's monkey's hand.

My interpretation in comment #9 just fell apart.

Completely.

Don't know what to do now. Guess I'll eat some shellfish.

[Bill sneezes]

33. stroke - 06/14/2005 11:34 am CDT

http://www.rogermoorephotography.com/amazon/images/Monkey%20black.jpg

Tell me that's an ape... and challenge my zoomanship again my friend and it won't be shaft you have to worry about... it'll be me.

34. Jared - 06/14/2005 11:36 am CDT

Bill, one could argue that a mime's hands are not his own in a figurative sense. They are inspired and possessed by the Muse of Mimicry. So, yes, the gloved hand is Shaft the Monkey-Mime's literal hand, but no, it is not really his, but belongs to the spirit of mime across the world.

35. Jared - 06/14/2005 11:38 am CDT

Wait, Stroke -- that pic was taken by James Bond?
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Brian -- or I should I say Bizarro Shaft? -- if you look at the original image Stroke links to, you can see that Shaft is giving you the back side of his hand. Looks like a challenge to me!
Foot pistols at dawn!

36. Quaid - 06/14/2005 11:49 am CDT

dusk

37. Bill - 06/14/2005 12:21 pm CDT

So the gloved hand is his, yet not his. The physicality of it is indeed but an illusion, a shifting, as it were, of consciousness from doing to being.

The whiteness of the hand reflects this enigma. The entity we "see", the "Ape-Monkey" self that is presented to our senses, is it not the central paradox of existence?

We see and yet don't see. The Ape is Ape and yet Monkey. The Glove is white, yet is it a Glove? Is it a hand? Perhaps it is our hand, shielding our perception from what must become; indeed, we shrink from this knowledge as we back, haltingly, down the coal mine of our own dark inspect.

Monkey-Ape brings wisdom. We flee.

Ponderings . . .

38. Jared - 06/14/2005 12:33 pm CDT

Bill, you are definitely seeing the picture, but are you really perceiving it? I think not.
Perhaps a new angle will set you on the right track. As apes are thought by some to be the evolutionary forefathers of humans, think of the monkey as a picture of man's primordial self, his inner self. (The mine shaft only enhances this "inner" perspective.) The glove on the hand naturally symbolizes refinement. Advancement. Achievement. Dare I say it? -- Humanity.

So essentially we have man's inner self, the primordial beast at the soul of all of us, pretending -- miming? -- true advanced personhood (symbolized with the glove).
The image, then, is obviously a satirization of man's "putting on airs," and even deeper, a comment on the ways modern man masks his total depravity. In that sense, your Jungian reading of the Shaft the Monkey-Mime image is not as perceptive as, say, a Calvinistic one.
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dusk

Ah, quite right, Quaid. I was thinking of how the duel would go down in the Bizarro World. Apologies.

39. Brian in Fresno - 06/14/2005 2:16 pm CDT

Now would that be dusk in your time zome or dusk in my time zone?

40. Brian in Fresno - 06/14/2005 4:52 pm CDT

Ok, Stroke, you got me. That is indeed a monkey.

41. stroke - 06/14/2005 5:26 pm CDT

score one for stroke and shaft!

sheesh... "score", "stroke", and "shaft"..... after this thread bill might have to institute "Innuendo Buster 2000".

brian, just so you know... i'm quite fond of zooing. i've actually found several sunday morning illustrations from my trips there. i'd be happy to share them with any other pastors out there!

42. Bill - 06/14/2005 6:48 pm CDT

Jared

Your Calvinist construct of Shaft the Monkey-Mime is indeed intriguing. The lit cooridor of the mine symbolizes the illusion of free-will within a deconstructed view of personhood, emphasized by the dead, cold stare of ApeMonkey.

Perception being what it is, perhaps a more conception-based analysis of this structure is warrented. Conception within the boundaries of a free-will that, by the very fact that it is bounded, explodes the very myth it set out to prove (that of personal motive and initiative). Intriguingly, this shows that it had not "set out" at all, but was rather birthed within the frameset of cognitive determinism.

I'm getting you, dude. I now know what Stroke meant. The glove is, indeed, superfluous - a mere decoy, if "mere" can describe such a brilliant ruse. Perception, thy name is Stroke.

He is a genius for our time.

43. Brian in Fresno - 06/15/2005 4:43 am CDT

So is it I who lost the foot shooting dual at dusk? Or did I have the date in my calendar wrong? I'll do anything to see that the vile, filthy little creature is either behind bars or dead. Oh did I mention that monkeys are vile filthy little creatures?

44. stroke - 06/15/2005 6:46 am CDT

maybe we never discussed a location... shaft is obviously averse to being filthy... notice the pristine white glove?

45. Bill - 06/15/2005 7:11 am CDT

Hey, you just made a haiku! Well, kinda. Let me spruce it up for you:

Notice
We never discussed
Shaft - averse to filthiness
pristine white glove

46. Bill - 06/15/2005 7:16 am CDT

There once was a monkey named Shaft
Who's aversions seemed a bit daft
He expounded to Stroke
"I'm a white-gloved Bloke
With cleanliness my dearest craft"

47. stroke - 06/15/2005 7:18 am CDT

um, it seems that the last line of your haiku is lacking a syllable.. unless i'm dumb.

48. stroke - 06/15/2005 7:32 am CDT

A duel was rumored to go down,
At dusk but in an unknown town.
A monkey with a gun,
Proves to be fun.
Only BIF would wear a frown!

49. Brian in Fresno - 06/15/2005 7:43 am CDT

You're crackin' me up Bill! It was really hard to stifle my laughter seein' as how I'm at work now.

50. Bill - 06/15/2005 8:06 am CDT

Well I thought haiku
Was structured five, seven, four
I could be wrong

51. stroke - 06/15/2005 9:45 am CDT

And wrong you are, Bill.
Haikus are 5-7-5.
Always have and always will!

52. Quaid - 06/15/2005 7:33 pm CDT

um . . . I'm confused

53. Quaid - 06/15/2005 7:34 pm CDT

I'm working with Ticketmaster to see what I can get worked out, but they are really being buttheads with the convenience fees and all.

So tickets might actually be $58.50

Sorry if this breaks the bank. Maybe Shaq could stick his name on it so the price can come down.

54. stroke - 06/16/2005 5:34 am CDT

can you look into the ppv sitch? a lot of shaft's family can't make it in person... or in monkey?

55. Brian in Fresno - 06/16/2005 5:46 am CDT

If you guys are going to charge for this dual I want part of the gate!

I still know where to bring my claymore.

56. Brian in Fresno - 06/16/2005 6:25 am CDT

My apologies gentlemen! The above post should have read along the lines of, I know not where to bring my claymore.

57. Quaid - 06/16/2005 6:52 am CDT

what's a claymore?

58. Brian in Fresno - 06/16/2005 7:15 am CDT

Think broadsword. The US Army co-opted the name for a land-mine as well.

59. stroke - 06/16/2005 8:31 am CDT

if you can bring a broadsword, heads up for poo flinging you barbarian, you.

60. Bill - 06/16/2005 8:38 am CDT

Yes, bring a broadsword
and fling poo as is your wont
Look! Five syllables

61. Paula - 07/18/2005 9:50 pm CDT

See? I told you monkeys tended to add depth to a post.

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